Score: 3

"This isn't serious"

submission: lol......

date: November 24, 2009

I see you're trying to keep a light atmosphere in the animation, and that's fine, but still, there are many places where you could improve on it.
The title is obviously inadequate, as is the lack of submission icon. Having a user icon of your own wouldn't hurt the overall look of the submission page.
As for the submission itself, try to frame the text in a box at the top or bottom of the screen (keeping it in one place is helpful) and add a button to proceed with the text when done reading. A lot of the text was too fast, which is a common mistake: after working on something long enough, you'll know the lines by heart, but the general audience won't, and will be reading for the first time. I'm sure there are some tutorials here on NG that could help you with that.

Score: 3

"Stale and unfunny"

submission: SBC's Spectacular Day

date: August 4, 2009

Way to pad the submission's size with a huge audio file.

Score: 6

"Good effort, gain experience"

submission: Aqua Man Episode 4

date: July 20, 2009

Throughout the submission, besides the very simple animation and voice acting with uneven levels, the idea that you're all very young didn't leave my mind. You all show a lot more focus and effort than the vast majority of NewGrounders your age, and these projects are great ways to increase your experience with Flash. You show great promise for the future.
As for the submission itself, like I said, the animation is quite simple. In future animations, try to look for some tutorials on how to draw with more details, such as lighting, shading, and texturing. And as has been said, the voice acting volume was up and down and all around, but that's an honest beginner's mistake.
All in all, it's not fantastic, but Rome wasn't built in a day, so keep at it and you might be looking at some green labels within a few submissions.

Score: 10

"SIMPLY THE BEST"

submission: Microphone Test

date: July 26, 2009

You, sir, are the absolute best voice actor on NewGrounds, and i shall personally duel anyone who disagrees. COCKS, AT DAWN! >:C

Score: 9

"Good hip-hop beat (?)"

submission: Dead Fusion

date: March 17, 2009

I believe it could be, it'd just be a matter of finding the right unconventional MC for it. I can think of a few off the top of my head.

Score: 9

"Huh... what's this still doing on?"

submission: Dead Tech

date: March 17, 2009

I left this track looping in a browser tab and only noticed after about an hour of lurking the BBS. I guess now that i was listening to the end\beginning better, it doesn't synch perfectly, but when you're distracted it kinda does, in a weird way. Which means... it's a good loop, i guess. Not knowing if that's what you were aiming for, good job regardless.